TheAkaman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pizza]

For a first flash animation this is certainly a great start. I'd say vary up the style since it looks a little too derivative of other flash cartoons like Eddsworld, and be sure to build on the lip-sync/voice work.

[Skully Bonedead (Pilot)]

Skully Bonehead himself is a charming little character, which especially shines through when the animation is most fluid. I noticed that the fluidity sort of decreased by the end of the project, but nonetheless those moments were entertaining. I'd say work more on making the style cleaner, more accurate to 3-dimensions and increase the smoothness of the animated movement, and you've got a show.

ToonymanStudios responds:

it's bone(D)ead read his short bio for more info. as i mention before this just a pilot-bit it's rush work an introduction to the character. i didn't want to spend to much time on the pilot since it's not part of the main series. this somewhat, of what i was going for i had the thought of making it simple from the start, i didn't like making it to fancy. i did some concept drawings before hand in detail but didn't like it. for 1 thing they didn't have that lovable look and feel. I wanted to create a fun lovable character who would fit the bill in making it to the show. the part about the end was cut short i wanted to make a bit longer but i didn't want to spoil it until the real series. so thanks for the feed back! and don't forget to favorite so you can get to watch more content from Me! a.k.a Toonyman.

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[Sartre Claus]

Very unique and interesting stylization. Got to hand it to ya, the concept of "Sartre Claus" is pretty good... though I would recommend more allusions to existentialist principles (which is a fascinating philosophy, by the way).

[Puppy Love]

Very nice submission. The style of the animation and the character design are quite enjoyable. It would be best if you submit in HD though because that will make it look a lot more crisp and clear. Do that and work on the backgrounds a bit more and I'd say you've got a really, really good thing going here.

Ztoons responds:

Thanks for the tips! Much appreciated! :D

[Watermelon]

Well... it's okay, but you really ought to have the video not play on an infinite loop. You can do that either by uploading the video in a non-flash file like .mov so that it plays through Newgrounds' streaming system or by using Actionscript in flash.

Chauder responds:

Yea :) im gonna design a start and replay button

[Treat]

Very nice. The animation may be simplistic but the story is sweet.

[Sonic X-it]

Pretty funny, I must say (Amy is pretty psycho, no?). I only came across your channel a few months ago (on YouTube actually) and watched a lot of your other animations, like Sonic Gut Feeling and the Double Dragon thing, and I've really been hooked on them. I can't believe you don't have more views on these! Keep doing what you're doing; these animations keep getting better, and I see a lot of potential in your stuff and a lot that's already there as well.

kalabor106 responds:

Hey thanks for the kind words. And yeah Amy is way crazy.

[My Bum it Goes (Prrrp)]

It demonstrates well the wittier end of the fart-joke spectrum.

[What To Do When Boarding]

Damn that was pretty funny. The jokes are pretty much spot-on, but I would recommend that in the future you give the characters more motion so their animation looks more fluid and life-like (especially the background characters who sometimes don't move at all). Otherwise it's very nicely done.

[How to Survive Freddy's]

"We look creepy?" I've GOT to get that poster