TheAkaman's Reviews

[Pizza]

For a first flash animation this is certainly a great start. I'd say vary up the style since it looks a little too derivative of other flash cartoons like Eddsworld, and be sure to build on the lip-sync/voice work.

[Skully Bonedead (Pilot)]

Skully Bonehead himself is a charming little character, which especially shines through when the animation is most fluid. I noticed that the fluidity sort of decreased by the end of the project, but nonetheless those moments were entertaining. I'd say work more on making the style cleaner, more accurate to 3-dimensions and increase the smoothness of the animated movement, and you've got a show.

ToonymanStudios responds:

it's bone(D)ead read his short bio for more info. as i mention before this just a pilot-bit it's rush work an introduction to the character. i didn't want to spend to much time on the pilot since it's not part of the main series. this somewhat, of what i was going for i had the thought of making it simple from the start, i didn't like making it to fancy. i did some concept drawings before hand in detail but didn't like it. for 1 thing they didn't have that lovable look and feel. I wanted to create a fun lovable character who would fit the bill in making it to the show. the part about the end was cut short i wanted to make a bit longer but i didn't want to spoil it until the real series. so thanks for the feed back! and don't forget to favorite so you can get to watch more content from Me! a.k.a Toonyman.

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[Sartre Claus]

Very unique and interesting stylization. Got to hand it to ya, the concept of "Sartre Claus" is pretty good... though I would recommend more allusions to existentialist principles (which is a fascinating philosophy, by the way).

[Mordecai Saw Game]

Very nice visuals, it looks almost exactly like the show. I didn't get very far but it's pretty fun.